Friday, May 29, 2015

Services and mental?

english, customer satisfaction, satisfied customers, customer service

To be honest, without a translation of the Korean language we have no idea what "services and mental" is supposed to mean, nor can we recommend a better way of stating this message in English. This would seem to have something to do with providing customer service, but we don't know in what way.

This is another example where either a second, full English translation should be provided for English speakers who probably can't read the Korean at all, or the entire message should be only in Korean since not every Korean understands English.

Sunday, May 24, 2015

This is from an English teacher?!?!?

English, English teacher

This is from an English teacher? Besides poor punctuation, "a easy decision" should be "an easy decision."

A second image, intentionally not included due to branding, states "one dogs - My friend has a dogs." First of all, you can't have "one dogs," you can only have "one dog." "Dogs" is plural, meaning more than one. Also, either "my friend has a dog" or "my friend has dogs," but no one can have "a dogs."

The moral of this post is to be careful who you learn from.

Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Get a smart body.

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Photographed at a fitness center in Andong (안동시), North Gyeongsang Province (경상북도), South Korea (대한민국), we first thought that this meant to say, "get smart, baby." Calling someone "baby" can indicate endearment or affection and is different from calling someone "a baby," which insultingly compares them to a newborn child.

However, because the adjacent sign reads, "make the best body," the first sign probably meant to say, "get a smart body."


Thursday, May 14, 2015

Writing a Better Warning Label

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Keeping the same sentence structure, you could rewrite this as:

WARNING: If the rotor blade is damaged, do not fly it; it will result in fuselage damage.

However, a better way to rewrite this would be:

WARNING: Operating with rotor blade damage could result in fuselage damage.

Friday, May 8, 2015

Grand Open

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Photographed in Andong (안동시), North Gyeongsang Province (경상북도), South Korea (대한민국), the use of "Grand Open" is common throughout the Republic of Korea. However, the phrase should be "Grand Opening."

Actually, the English should be removed from this sign. If you don't read Korean, then you don't know what kind of business is opening here unless you look through the windows. And if you read Korean, then you may not be able to read the English. The best approach, if there will be English-speaking employees, would be to have one sign fully in Korean and another fully in English. If not, just keep the signs fully in Korean.

Thursday, April 30, 2015

The natural love for coffee

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Photographed outside a coffee shop somewhere in South Korea (대한민국), this contains two statements. The phrase "the natural love for coffee" is not a sentence, but it works as a slogan. The sentence with it, however, would read much better as "you can taste the love."

Sunday, April 26, 2015

you and coffee, we only think.

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This is the window of a coffee shop in Gunsan (군산시), North Jeolla Province (전라북도), South Korea (대한민국). Any native English speaker should understand the sentence "you and coffee, we only think" even though the grammar is incorrect. Because this is a coffee shop, the owner obviously thinks that everyone should drink more coffee.

There are many ways to rewrite this, but we'll focus on two key points. First, the phrase "you and coffee" is an idea, but you have to add more words to turn this fragment into a sentence. Second, remove the word "only" and just use "we think." So, for one example, you could state, "we think that you and coffee belong together." That actually has a romantic sound to it. You can also shorten this to "you and coffee belong together," because the "we think" is implied.

Also, don't forget to capitalize the first letter of every sentence!