"Love sick" is an English idiom, but it is used as a state of being, not as a process. Someone can be love sick, in which case he or she loves someone else very much, but someone does not "become sick" or "sicken" with love. A better way of writing this would be: "No, we are never stricken with love twice."
The second sentence, "Cupid spends no second arrow on the same heart," sounds very nice and is rather poetic.
A third sentence, above these, simply needs punctuation and one letter capitalized: "If you would be loved, love and be lovable."
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