Thursday, May 14, 2015

Writing a Better Warning Label

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Keeping the same sentence structure, you could rewrite this as:

WARNING: If the rotor blade is damaged, do not fly it; it will result in fuselage damage.

However, a better way to rewrite this would be:

WARNING: Operating with rotor blade damage could result in fuselage damage.

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